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It’s never their fault, just ask them. They will tell you, “I’m not the one who pulled the trigger.” I’ve heard their stories so many times it’s downright sickening.

“No,” I want to say, “you didn’t pull the trigger, but you set in motion a chain of events that led to someone’s death. Whether it’s a man held at gunpoint, ordered to lay on the floor inside a vacant house while you strip him of his wallet and keys, the man shooting at you as you try to make a clean getaway in his truck, his stray bullet killing a grandmother sitting in her living room, or the Detroit police busting down a door—a warrant for your arrest—a policeman’s handgun discharging, for reasons we may never know, killing a seven-year old girl. It is you, yes: YOU, who are ultimately responsible; YOU who endangered the lives of others.”

You’re not buying it. You fail to see the logic in a sequence of illogical events. “What if the man charged with murder,” you say, referring to the second case, “is innocent?”

“Then why is he hiding?” I ask.

He ignores my question. “The police should’ve knocked on the door instead of bombing the house.”

“Maybe they did, maybe they didn’t.” I say, and then ask, “Still, why were the police there in the first place?”

This is the type of dialogue that takes place in prison; this is where we warehouse young gang bangers and dope dealers, a majority of whom blur the lines between right and wrong because of a strong sense of entitlement, because of their disillusioned beliefs that nobody will get hurt so long as they get with the program—THEIR PROGRAM. When will they learn that life isn’t a rap video or Hollywood movie? Most of them will sit in prison year after year waiting for another chance to continue their street hustle.

I say, “Let them wait. Let them think they’ll never get out.” Some chains of events are preventable.

12 comments:

ivan@creativewriting.ca said...

Cops and gangbangers.

I swear Tornto is becoming big Detroit.

And somehow,a prosecutor's hands are tied.

A brazen gun battle on Toronto’s busiest street on the busiest shopping day of 2005, shocked the city and drew international attention.
Jane Creba,16, doing her Boxing Day shopping, was killed instantly.
Seven men and three youths were charged with murder, but so far, only two men were convicted just recently -- of manslaughter.
The shooting started after Jeremiah Valentine exited the Foot Locker store armed with a .357-calibre Magnum revolver and confronted a group of 10 males, including the two defendants.

The inteded victim drew and fired a gun intending to kill Valentine in the battle outside the Foot Locker shoe store, two blocks north of the Eaton Centre.

Court proceedings say that for the jury to find the intended gun-toting "victim" guilty they must decide that either he drew and fired a 9 mm Ruger semi-automatic handgun intending to kill Valentine or passed it to a youth, Jorrell Simpson-Rowe, who fired with the same intention during shootout.

Whatever happened, a beautiful young girl was shot and killed while innocently hoping for a bargain on Boxing Day.

Manslaughter?

JR's Thumbprints said...

One day after my post, in the Detroit Free Press, Journalist Rochelle Riley writes:

"We need to stop harboring criminals and averting our eyes to thuggery and saying we don’t know when someone asks about the gunman who you do know is right across the street.

Embracing a zero-toler­ance attitude toward crime will make it easier for police officers to do their jobs and for us to know when they are wrong. It also will make the city safer for children."

She goes on to say: "Aiyana (the 7-yr old girl) didn’t die at 12:40 a.m. Sunday morning.

She died at 2:20 p.m. Fri­day afternoon when a thug fired two bullets into the chest of Jerean Blake, a 17­year-old Southeastern High School student. In broad daylight. In front of a gas station."

Again, a sad chain reaction of events.

Beth said...

“It’s never their fault, just ask them.”
Reminds me of the thinking of children.
Does reality ever set in?

Charles Gramlich said...

I was just watching a show the other night about a guy who assualted a twelve year old sexually. Got about 4 years. Didn't serve all that time. Got out and raped and killed two women. Had to turn off the TV and go sit on my deck with a book that could help me escape reality.

Anonymous said...

I agree with Ms, Riley. The immediate community knows what was happening at that house. The father of Jarean Blake deserves to see that justice is served. Will Figer seek him out? I don't think so. But the hug a thug and protect a thug mentality needs to stop or more of these cowards (so called gansta's) will be hiding at Mamma's house and grandma's house from the "PoLeese," not caring who gets hurt or killed because of what they did. MW

jodi said...

JR-the news lately is just rife with these horrors. I was at the hoedown for awhile on Saturday, but did not see that Pink dude. Thank God!

JR's Thumbprints said...

Hey Jodi,
Mr. Pink will be embraced by MPRI the minute he steps into RG&C; they will begin his rehabilitation as soon as he starts his prison bit. Sad sad news when children are hacked with a meat cleaver. How long before he makes the system work for him?

Erik Donald France said...

This is true, but look up the foodchain to the big power brokers, all brazenly follwing their own programs. I mean Wall Street zillionaires, BP cash cows, all of that. Role models or roll'em models?

Mona said...

JR! WHAT HAPPENED TO MARK!!???? I hope he is Alright! I am much concerned & anxious!

JR's Thumbprints said...

Mona, not only are the riverbanks where I live scorched, so are the many pseudo-neighborhoods of Detroit. Mark and I had breakfast this morning and he is as well as well gets.

Tired perhaps.

Let's just hope the Motor City, with all its mechanisms, doesn't pull him into a dark hole he can't get out of. If it were me, I'd've left long ago. Moved miles north of 8 Mile. Hell, I'm looking to move even farther away.

Lana Gramlich said...

What I want to know is why we're not pursuing & prosecuting gang bangers like the terrorists they are. We're stuck with the Patriot Act, so let's at least employ it where it can do some good.

Julie said...

You are so right. There's always an excuse. It's never their fault. I guess I can expect criminals to make excuses. What really gets me is when groups make excuses for them (I'm thinking of my own state). There's always some group here telling the pitiful tale of a murderer's childhood poverty. In reality, there are a lot of people, including myself, who were raised in extreme poverty. We never robbed, raped, or killed anyone.

Our latest controversy involves several murderers and rapists who are being set free. It's sickening to read some of the articles about it. I swear, you can literally hear the harp strings playing. They are repeat offenders. In one case, a child was raped and murdered. I'm the biggest bleeding heart in the world when it comes to someone who is truly trying to live a decent life, but these people are not decent. They should never see the light of day.

Shew. Sorry for my rant. It gets me really riled up. Once again, I tip my hat to you, JR.